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2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Irene! It is Monday again. Time really flies as you told me. I find a funny idiom \' walk on eggshells\' I may not forget this idiom forever. I heard from Radio that Today is Coming of age Day. Did you remember how you spent your coming of age day? In my case, we gave and took flowers and perfumes on Coming of age day for present. And we went a bar to drink bear. because we can drink after 19 years old( 20? ) As I remember, I drank a lot until I vomited with my friends. how silly it is hihihi I do not have idea how the young celebrate thesedays. Oh~~ you have young two sons, so you must know how they celebrate. Tell me how you celebrate coming of age day next class ^^ Have a good day !

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! I don\'t know if we have the same idea on what is Coming of Age day is. Let\'s talk about it in the class. ^_^     

~ T. Irene ~

Hi Irene!
It is Monday again. Time really flies as you told me.

>>>  It is Monday again. Time really flies so fast as you\'ve told me.
 I find a funny idiom \' walk on eggshells\'

>>> I found a funny idiom, \' walk on eggshells\' 
 I may not forget this idiom forever.
>>> Correct.  

 I heard from Radio that Today is Coming of age Day.

>>> I heard from the radio that today is the Coming of Age day. 
 Did you remember how you spent your coming of age day?

>>> Do you remember how you spent your coming of age? 
 In my case, we gave and took flowers and perfumes on Coming of age day for present.

>>> In my case, we give and receive flowers and perfumes as presents for our coming of age party.   
 And we went a bar to drink bear. because we can drink after 19 years old( 20? )

>>> Then we went to a bar and drank some beer because we are over 19 years old.  
 As I remember, I drank a lot until I vomited with my friends. how silly it is hihihi

>>> As I remember, I drank a lot with my friends until I vomited. It was so silly.   
 I do not have idea how the young celebrate these days.

>>>  I do not have any idea how young people celebrate these days. 
 Oh~~ you have young two sons, so you must know how they celebrate.

>>> Correct.  
 Tell me how you celebrate coming of age day next class ^^

>>> Tell me how you celebrate the coming of age next class.
 Have a good day !

>>>  Correct.



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