homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! I don\'t know if we have the same idea on what is Coming of Age day is. Let\'s talk about it in the class. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene!
It is Monday again. Time really flies as you told me.
>>> It is Monday again. Time really flies so fast as you\'ve told me.
I find a funny idiom \' walk on eggshells\'
>>> I found a funny idiom, \' walk on eggshells\'
I may not forget this idiom forever.
>>> Correct.
I heard from Radio that Today is Coming of age Day.
>>> I heard from the radio that today is the Coming of Age day.
Did you remember how you spent your coming of age day?
>>> Do you remember how you spent your coming of age?
In my case, we gave and took flowers and perfumes on Coming of age day for present.
>>> In my case, we give and receive flowers and perfumes as presents for our coming of age party.
And we went a bar to drink bear. because we can drink after 19 years old( 20? )
>>> Then we went to a bar and drank some beer because we are over 19 years old.
As I remember, I drank a lot until I vomited with my friends. how silly it is hihihi
>>> As I remember, I drank a lot with my friends until I vomited. It was so silly.
I do not have idea how the young celebrate these days.
>>> I do not have any idea how young people celebrate these days.
Oh~~ you have young two sons, so you must know how they celebrate.
>>> Correct.
Tell me how you celebrate coming of age day next class ^^
>>> Tell me how you celebrate the coming of age next class.
Have a good day !
>>> Correct.
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