homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hello Ms. [이름]! Well, honor is indeed a great word. It describes a person with integrity and respectability. We don\'t have to be celebrities or great persons to be distinguished by this word. In our own little way, we have shown how honorable we are by how we treat other people and make good things to the world around us. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
ESSAY: What does honor mean to you? How important is it to you? Does your culture value honor? What exemplifies honor in your culture?
When I read this essay topic, I am thinking about the word \' honor\'
>>> When I read about this topic, I started thinking of the word \'honor.\'
Can I hear frome others like the common comments \' It is honor to meet you\' in my life?
>>> Can I say something like the common comment, \'It is an honor to meet you\'?
I feel that I am nothing in this world when I think about this question.
>>> I feel lost when I think about this question.
Celebraties or great people must hear from others everyday about honor but Why I don\'t remember hearing from others about honor?
>>> Celebrities or great people must have heard about this word but I can\'t remember hearing this.
Nobody say to me so far.
>>> Nobody mentioned it to me.
Do I have to try to be a great man (person)?
>>> Correct.
How can I be a great man (person)?
>>> Correct.
Being a great man is a destiny?
>>> Is being great a destiny?
Now that I was born, I really want to hear \'honor\'
>>> Since I exist in this world, I want to hear a lot about \'honor.
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