homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Make a sentence using the words below:
1. elderly
- Experts say there will be more elderly people in 20 years than younger people in Korea.
2. casualty
- The earthquake made so many casualties.
3. Caucasian
- American continent was the land of natives, but Caucasians from Europe had taken their land and they\'ve been ruling them efficiently.
4. natural disaster
- Japan has been dealing with many natural disasters well, but when the nuclear accident occured it was a different story.
5. massive
- There are massive people go to their hometown or go on a trip during Chinese national holidays.
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1. elderly
- Experts say there will be more elderly people in 20 years than younger people in Korea.
>> Experts say there will be more elderly than younger people in 20 years in Korea.
2. casualty
- The earthquake made so many casualties.
>> A great number of casualties were reported due to the earthquake.
3. Caucasian
- American continent was the land of natives, but Caucasians from Europe had taken their land and they\'ve been ruling them efficiently.
>> The American continent was the land of natives, but Caucasians had taken over their land and they\'ve been ruling over the people efficiently.
4. natural disaster
- Japan has been dealing with many natural disasters well, but when the nuclear accident occured, it was a different story.
>> CORRECT
>> occured >> occurred
5. massive
- There are massive people go to their hometown or go on a trip during Chinese national holidays.
>> A massive number of people go to their hometowns or on a trip during Chinese national holidays.
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