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2019-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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ESSAY: What personality traits in other people do you love/hate? Can a person change their personality? Explain. I like a person who is quiet , objective, introverted but has humors and attractive person. I don\'t like loud voice and bluffer although he/she is good looking and in a good condition. For example, my husband is very quiet person . he always listen to me and try to understand. When we go shopping togather, he always show his opnion directly to me. I really like his objective personality. Although he doesn\'t talk much , he makes me laugh with his smart jokes and wits. It\'s like when I say \'and I\' , he says \'I will always love you\' (Whitney huston song) We are a match made in heaven(^^) Oh, I am sorry, I compliment my husband too much.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!  ^_^ You are very luck!  You have such a very sweet husband. I envy you.

~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: What personality traits in other people do you love/hate? Can a person change their personality? Explain. 
I like a person who is quiet , objective, introverted but has humors and attractive person.

>>>   I like a person who is quiet ,objective and introvert but has humor and is an attractive.   
 I don\'t like loud voice and bluffer although he/she is good looking and in a good condition.

>>>   I don\'t like loud voices and a bluffer even if he/she is good looking.    
 For example, my husband is very quiet person .

>>>   For example, my husband is a very quiet person .    

he always listen to me and try to understand.

>>>  He always listens to me and tries to understand my point.       
 When we go shopping togather, he always show his opnion directly to me.

>>>  When we go shopping together, he always speaks his opinion of my choices.   

I really like his objective personality.

>>>  Correct.     
 Although he doesn\'t talk much, he makes me laugh with his smart jokes and wits.

>>> Correct.     
 It\'s like when I say \'and I\' , he says \'I will always love you\' (Whitney huston song)

>>>  Correct.      
 We are a match made in heaven(^^)

>>>  Correct.      
 Oh, I am sorry, I compliment my husband too much. 

>>> Oh, I am sorry, I complimented my husband too much.      


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