homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [이름]! ^_^ You are very luck! You have such a very sweet husband. I envy you.
~ T. Irene ~
ESSAY: What personality traits in other people do you love/hate? Can a person change their personality? Explain.
I like a person who is quiet , objective, introverted but has humors and attractive person.
>>> I like a person who is quiet ,objective and introvert but has humor and is an attractive.
I don\'t like loud voice and bluffer although he/she is good looking and in a good condition.
>>> I don\'t like loud voices and a bluffer even if he/she is good looking.
For example, my husband is very quiet person .
>>> For example, my husband is a very quiet person .
he always listen to me and try to understand.
>>> He always listens to me and tries to understand my point.
When we go shopping togather, he always show his opnion directly to me.
>>> When we go shopping together, he always speaks his opinion of my choices.
I really like his objective personality.
>>> Correct.
Although he doesn\'t talk much, he makes me laugh with his smart jokes and wits.
>>> Correct.
It\'s like when I say \'and I\' , he says \'I will always love you\' (Whitney huston song)
>>> Correct.
We are a match made in heaven(^^)
>>> Correct.
Oh, I am sorry, I compliment my husband too much.
>>> Oh, I am sorry, I complimented my husband too much.
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