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Hi, Seong Won! :)
Thank you for writing an essay about our topic for today.
I appreciate your honesty.
I agree that there are times when people have to lie not because of their selfishness but because they don\'t want others to worry or to get hurt.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a restful night. ^^
See you again tomorrow.
~Charry :)
I think we have to tell the truth according to the circumstances.
>> CORRECT!
It is good to tell the truth, but in some situation, it is better to not tell the truth.
>> It is good to tell the truth, but in some situations, it is better to not tell the truth.
I can\'t remember when is better to not telling the truth right now, but I know there is a situation which is better not to tell the truth.
>> I can\'t remember when it is better to not tell the truth right now, but I know that there is a situation where it is better not to tell the truth.
If a person is happy because he doesn\'the know the truth, than I think it isn\'t bad to not tell the truth.
>> If a person is happy because he doesn\'the know the truth, then I think it isn\'t bad to not tell the truth.
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