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At classroom I always want to eat snacks like jelly, candy or chocolate. When teacher saw that we\'re eating some snacks at class time she will get mad at us. So it is very dangerous. But I often eat jelly with my friends. And also today I ate jelly with my friends^^.
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Hi [이름]!
Eating snacks makes us happy.
Just don\'t overdo it.
You are such a happy kid.
Stay that way.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
At classroom I always want to eat snacks like jelly, candy or chocolate. >> I always want to eat snacks like jelly, candies and chocolates in the classroom.
When teacher saw that we\'re eating some snacks at class time she will get mad at us.
>> If my teacher sees us eating some snacks in the classroom, she will get mad at us.
So it is very dangerous.
>> That\'s why it\'s very dangerous.
But I often eat jelly with my friends.
>> However, I often eat jelly with my friends.
And also today I ate jelly with my friends^^.
>> I also ate jelly with my friends today.
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