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Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you ma\'am for being such a good friend. You always encourage me with positive words. It is a pleasure really to have meet you through this company. ^_^ Don\'t be afraid of making a mistake. You will learn more from an error because you will be more careful next time.
~. T. Irene ~
Hi Irene! I am so sorry to hear what happened yesterday party.
>>> Hi Irene! I am so sorry to hear what happened at yesterday\'s party.
I want to hug you and pat your shoulders with my hands if you are next to me. (Patting, patting )
>>> Correct.
>>> I want to hug you and pat your shoulders with my hands if only you are next to me. (Patting, patting )
By the way, I am going to go to a golf links today to play golf.
>>> By the way, I am going to a golf links today to play.
I have played short game golf but I have never palyed at the real golf links.
>>> I have played short game golf before but not in real golf links.
I am exiting now but little bit worried if I make mistakes.
>>> I am excited now but I\'m a little bit worried if I make mistakes.
As you know, I have been learning golf for 3 months.
>>> As you know, I have been learning golf for 3 months already.
today will be the test day how well I learn and make swing foam.
>>> Today will be the test day for what I have learned and for assessing my swinging form.
My golf tutor is also worried if I get a stress and then I deciede not to play golf anymore.
>>> My golf tutor is also worried that if I get stressed, I might decide not to play golf anymore.
Yesterday, During a class, he emphasized not to get a stress and golf is just a game for fun with good people.
>>> Yesterday, during the practice, he emphasized on not getting stressed out and that golf is just a fun game with good people.
I know what he wants to try to tell me, but I want to hit the ball straightly on a green with a big smile.
>>> I knew what he meant but I just want to be able to hit the ball correctly on the greens.
Well. I will talk to you tomorrow the results. b
>>> Well, I will tell you the results tomorrow.
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