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2019-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene! I am so sorry to hear what happened yesterday party. I want to hug you and pat your shoulders with my hands if you are next to me. (Patting, patting ) By the way, I am going to go to a golf links today to play golf. I have played short game golf but I have never palyed at the real golf links. I am exiting now but little bit worried if I make mistakes. As you know, I have been learning golf for 3 months. today will be the test day how well I learn and make swing foam. My golf tutor is also worried if I get a stress and then I deciede not to play golf anymore. Yesterday, During a class, he emphasized not to get a stress and golf is just a game for fun with good people. I know what he wants to try to tell me, but I want to hit the ball straightly on a green with a big smile. Well. I will talk to you tomorrow the results.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you ma\'am for being such a good friend. You always encourage me with positive words. It is a pleasure really to have meet you through this company. ^_^ Don\'t be afraid of making a mistake. You will learn more from an error because you will be more careful next time.  

~. T. Irene  ~

Hi Irene!  I am so sorry to hear what happened yesterday party.

>>> Hi Irene!  I am so sorry to hear what happened  at yesterday\'s party.
 I want to hug you and pat your shoulders with my hands if you are next to me.   (Patting, patting )

>>>  Correct.

>>>  I want to hug you and pat your shoulders with my hands if only you are next to me.   (Patting, patting )
 By the way,  I am going to go to a golf links today to play golf.

>>>  By the way,  I am going to a golf links today to play. 
 I have played short game golf but I have never palyed at the real golf links.

>>>  I have played short game golf before but not in real golf links. 
 I am exiting now but little bit worried if I make mistakes.

>>>  I am excited now but I\'m a little bit worried if I make mistakes.
 As you know, I have been learning golf for 3 months.

>>>  As you know, I have been learning golf for 3 months already.

today will be the test day how well I learn and make swing foam.

>>> Today will be the test day for what I have learned and for assessing my swinging form.
 My golf tutor is also worried if I get a stress and then I deciede not to play golf anymore.

>>> My golf tutor is also worried  that if I get stressed, I might decide not to play golf anymore.
 Yesterday, During a class, he emphasized not to get a stress and golf is just a game for fun with good people.

>>>  Yesterday, during  the practice, he emphasized on not getting stressed out and that golf is just a fun game with good people. 
 I know what he wants to try to tell me, but I want to hit the ball straightly on a green with a big smile.

>>> I knew what he meant but I just want to be able to hit the ball correctly on the greens.  
 Well. I will talk to you tomorrow the results. b

>>> Well, I will tell you the results tomorrow.






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