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Hi [이름]!
The one you\'ve shared is awe-inspiring. :) This is so favorable. I did it before but in a different way. :)
Volunteers are not paid not because they are worthless, but because they are priceless. :)
regards,
Teacher Lucy
I\'ve once tried.
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>>I\'ve tried it once.
I worked as an assistant to a cook in the convent.
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>>I gave a hand to cook in a convent.
That convent provides a cheap lunch to the elder who live alone.
>>That convent provides a cheap lunch to the elders who live alone.
>>That convent provides a cheap lunch to the elder who lives alone.
I washed vegetables, choped them, cleaned kitchen and dishes and served food from 9am to 1pm.
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>>I did all around work and served food at 9 am to 1 pm.
I couldn\'t sit down and rest even for a second.
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>>I couldn\'t sit down and even rest for a second.
I had to stand up and move.
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>>I had to keep on working.
Volunteers were exhausted after work.
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>>We were all drained after the work.
When I had a lunch, my arms started shaking a littel bit.
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>>My arms were trembling while having lunch.
furthermore, I felt my arms were so heavy like iron.
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>>Furthermore, I felt that my arms were flagging.
Anyway, it was a very difficult mission for me.
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>>Anyway, it was a challenging task to me.
I can\'t forget.
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>>It\'s remarkable.
Before volunteering, I imagined of being proud of myself.
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>>Before volunteering, I feel honored for myself.
But after done, I was just tired.
>>But after volunteering, I was just so tired.
There was no accomplishment...
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Little did I know that I felt like this...
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>>Little did I know that I will have a feeling like this.
Do you mean \"flaked on\"?
Yes, it\'s often use. It means that \"To be let down by someone after an arrangement was made. Drop of plans or change of plans at the last minute.\"
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