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According to the Wikipedia, A hobby is a regular activity done for enjoyment, typically during one\'s leisure time.

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>>A hobby is a regular activity done for enjoyment, typically during one\'s leisure time, according to the Wikipedia.

Most of all, the most important thing is \"regular\".

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>>Obviously, the most important thing is  the word \"regular\".

Second is \"for enjoyment\".

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>>Then, it\'s \"enjoyment\".

From this point of view, Reading books can be called a hobby.
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>>From this perspective, reading books can be called a hobby.

My hobby is reading books.

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>>One of my hobby is reading books.

There is a library near my place and my company, I go there whenever I\'m bored.

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>>I go to the library whenever I\'m bored which is near my place and my company.

I am interesting in titles. 

>>I am interested in titles.

Once the title come into my heart, I choose it and start to read.

>>Once the title comes into my heart, I choose it and start to read.

>>Once the title catches my heart, I choose it and start to read.

My hobby is not reading books but reading titles.

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>>I prefer reading titles than the content.

It is my enjoyment. 

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>>It is for my enjoyment. 

If the book that I choose is interesting, I\'m happy.

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>>I\'m happy when the book I chose is interesting.

If it isn\'t, I\'m disappointed.

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>>I\'m disappointed when it\'s not.

Anyway, I need time to refresh myself.

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That\'s why we should have hobbies.

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I\'ll go to library tomorrow to find intersting books(titles)

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>>I\'ll go to the library to find interesting book titles.