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2019-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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The best compliment I\'ve ever received was from my school English teacher. She said to me that my English is the best in my school. It was not a big compliment, but I fell really good. And I really like her. But now she is not my English teache anymore. She is English teacher for fourth grade.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
You had a good opening here.
You made sure that the sentences were comprehensive.
Be careful of your patterns and spelling.
Overall, the composition is well-written.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The best compliment I\'ve ever received was from my school English teacher. 
>> Correct
She said to me that my English is the best in my school. 
>> She told me that my English skills were the best among the students in my school. 
It was not a big compliment, but I fell really good.
>> It was not a big compliment, but I felt really good.
And I really like her. 
>> I really liked her.
But now she is not my English teache anymore. 
>> However, she\'s not my English teacher anymore.
She is English teacher for fourth grade.
>> She is an English teacher for fourth graders. 

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