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Three things I most grateful for are my parents, friends and teacher. First, my parents every day work hard, cook for me and also do many things for me. Next my friends always make me happy. When I feel sad, they also feel sad with me. And when I feel good they also feel good together. Lastly my teacher always teach me. She tries to do good things for me.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Three things I most grateful for are my parents, friends and teacher.
>> The three things that I\'m most grateful for are my parents, friends and teacher.
First, my parents every day work hard, cook for me and also do many things for me.
>> First, my parents work hard every day to cook for me and also do many things for me.
Next my friends always make me happy.
>> Next, my friends always make me happy.
When I feel sad, they also feel sad with me.
>> When I feel sad, they also feel sad for me.
And when I feel good they also feel good together.
>> When I feel good, we all feel good together.
Lastly my teacher always teach me.
>> Lastly, my teacher always teaches me.
She tries to do good things for me.
>> Correct
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