Homework
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My least household chore is dish washing. Because When I was young was doing dish washing. But the dish was so heavy and slipery.So i drop the dish. And I got hurt on my foot. So I don\'t like dish washing.
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Take note of the corrections below.
Avoid starting your sentences with conjunctions like \"but\", \"and\" and \"so.\"^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My least household chore is dish washing. >> My least favorite household chore is dish washing.
Because When I was young was doing dish washing.
>> I always did the dishes when I was young.
But the dish was so heavy and slipery.
>> However, the dishes were so heavy and slippery.
So i drop the dish.
>> That\'s why I kept dropping them.
And I got hurt on my foot.
>> One time, I hurt my foot while doing the dishes.
So I don\'t like dish washing.
>> That\'s why I don\'t like dish washing.
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