Homework 9
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Q. Who in your life has been your biggest influence and why?
A. I has been influenced by Han Bi-ya who traveled around the world and worked as an international rescue activist. It was when I was in high school that I read her book called \"March off the map\" which let me have a dream of working internationally in any way. And I also wanted to become a journalist covering conflict area in the world. Now I am working on planning international conferences which means that I has been influenced by her so far.
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Hi Bomi! Great work! I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I has been influenced by Han Bi-ya who traveled around the world and worked as an international rescue activist.
>>I have been influenced by Han Bi-ya who traveled around the world and worked as an international rescue activist.
It was when I was in high school that I read her book called \"March off the map\" which let me have a dream of working internationally in any way.
>>CORRECT
And I also wanted to become a journalist covering conflict area in the world.
>>CORRECT (*areas)
Now I am working on planning international conferences which means that I has been influenced by her so far.
>>CORRECT (*have been)
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