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2015-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear jeny. In particular, foreigners safer. >>Foreigners are safe. (Sorry! I can't understand this sentence) Sorry to confuse .. It means that Korea is very safe country. It is not dangerous for foreigners to go back and forth alone at night and day. Most of the people here are friendly. I think You feel dangerous because a lot of bad news in Korea. == Body == 1. All candidates should write down their respective roll numbers on 2. They pursued the culprit and caught him. 3. A righteous man will never support a wrong cause. 4. Spiritual progress is essential to gain happiness in life. 5. We had a good laughter over his silly mistakes.

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Hello Oh you are very fast, very good!!!! I know that it is quite difficult to study prepositions but let me give you a tip, in most cases, to bring suggests movement to ward a speaker. I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^ T. Jeny   Dear jeny. >>correctIn particular, foreigners safer.>>Foreigners are safe in Korea.Sorry to confuse .. >>Sorry to confue you. >>Sorry you were confused.It means that Korea is very safe country. >>correctIt is not dangerous for foreigners to go back and forth alone at night and day. >>correctMost of the people here are friendly. >>correctI think You feel dangerous because a lot of bad news in Korea. >>I think you feel unsafe because of the bad news you hear about Korea.== Body ==1. All candidates should write down their respective roll numbers on >>All candidates should write down their respective roll numbers on the answer sheet.2. They pursued the culprit and caught him. >>correct3. A righteous man will never support a wrong cause. >>correct4. Spiritual progress is essential to gain happiness in life. >>correct5. We had a good laughter over his silly mistakes. >>We had a good laugh over his silly mistakes.

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