Homework 9/12
학생이 쓴 원문
“We Generate Fears While We Sit. We Overcome Them By Action"
When I ran a little business, I worried if I get left behind.
Though I have my own strength, other competitors always look better than me.
So I was in frustration and discouragement without a concrete action.
Fortunately I can get a encouragement with my coworker's help.
We just started to go out on the road and spread our flyers.
And it was effective and efficient to let the people know our service.
As a result, my business could have been grown and other companies wanted to work with us.
We don't know anything while we sit because we cannot see anything at that position.
We should stand up and see what they are doing and what we are doing.
Thank you for today's class. Have a nice day! Lorna.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian!! :)
What\'s up? How are you doing now?
You\'re welcome and thank you as well for today :).
I appreciate you for doing your homework too! Great job!
Have fun and I\'ll see you tomorrow.
~ T. Lorna^-^
>> When I ran a little business, I worried that I might get left behind.
Though I have my own strength, other competitors always look better than me.
Though I have my own strength, other competitors always look better than me.
>> Though I have my own strength, I still thought that other competitors might be better than me.
So I was in frustration and discouragement without a concrete action.
So I was in frustration and discouragement without a concrete action.
>> So, I was frustrated and discouraged without doing any concrete action.
Fortunately I can get a encouragement with my coworker\'s help.
Fortunately I can get a encouragement with my coworker\'s help.
>> Fortunately, I got encouragement from my coworker.
We just started to go out on the road and spread our flyers.
We just started to go out on the road and spread our flyers.
>> We started to go out on the road and gave a lot of our flyers to the people.
And it was effective and efficient to let the people know our service.
And it was effective and efficient to let the people know our service.
>> It was effective and efficient to let those people know about our service.
As a result, my business could have been grown and other companies wanted to work with us.
As a result, my business could have been grown and other companies wanted to work with us.
>> As a result, my business have grown and other companies wanted to work with us.
We don\'t know anything while we sit because we cannot see anything at that position.
We don\'t know anything while we sit because we cannot see anything at that position.
>> We won\'t know anything if we will just sit because we cannot see and learn anything by just sitting.
We should stand up and see what they are doing and what we are doing.
We should stand up and see what they are doing and what we are doing.
>> We should stand up and see what other people are doing and what are we doing.
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