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2018-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I feel motivated when learning something new. When I fall in love with new field, It's difficult to persist daily life because I have the new field on the brain. When I was in school days, I like mathematics. Whenever I learn new formulas, I should apply it to many questions. About four years ago, I was addicted to do yoga. I was unbearable not to do yoga. Especially I become stimulated when I feel I am doing the same position better than past.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I feel motivated when learning something new.

>> Correct
When I fall in love with new field, It\'s difficult to persist daily life because I have the new field on the brain.

>> When I fall in love with a new field, it\'s difficult to go on with my daily life because I have the new field on the brain.
When I was in school days, I like mathematics.

>> I liked Mathematics during my school days.
Whenever I learn new formulas, I should apply it to many questions.

>> Whenever I learn a new formula, I had to apply it to many problems.
About four years ago, I was addicted to do yoga.

>> Correct
I was unbearable not to do yoga.

>> I couldn\'t bear not doing yoga.
Especially I become stimulated when I feel I am doing the same position better than past.

>> I feel especially inspired when I feel that I\'m in a better position than I was in the past.

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