Homework(9/12) : The most difficult language to learn

2016-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jen. I move into Chuseok this long weekend, I will have time to enjoy family ,have a delicious foods, go hiking and go biking with my wife. I hope you have time to enjoy your pretty daughter and husband. See you on next Monday. bye friend. = body = I think that the most difficult language to learn is English. i have learned 3 languages such as French, Japanese and English. English language was mandatory from middle to university. i learned French in high school as second foreign language except for English. After graduating university and taking a job, I learned Japanese language for overseas training purposes for 6 months. Japanese was relatively easier than French or English because the word order is almost similar from that of other 2 languages. But Among all language i have learned, English is most difficult. The reason is because even though i have been learning English for long time, 45 years, from middle school to now, I am poor at Englis

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

We all have our own fear but we need to overcome that fear in order for us to be successful.

I hope you\'ll continue that level of positivity for our succeeding classes. c\",)
May you have a stress-free day ahead.
Take care!!!

~~~T. Jeny~~~

Friend Jen.

>>correct
I move into Chuseok this long weekend, I will have time to enjoy family ,have a delicious foods, go hiking and go biking with my wife.

>>We will celebrate Chuseok this long holiday, I will have time to enjoy with my family, eat delicious food, go hiking and go biking with my wife.
I hope you have time to enjoy your pretty daughter and husband.

>>I hope you\'ll have time to enjoy with your pretty daughter and husband.
See you on next Monday. bye friend.
>>correct
= body =
I think that the most difficult language to learn is English.

>>correct
i have learned 3 languages such as French, Japanese and English.

>>correct
English language was mandatory from middle to university.

>>correct
i learned French in high school as second foreign language except for English.

>>I have learned French in high school as a second foreign language except from English.
After graduating university and taking a job, I learned Japanese language for overseas training purposes for 6 months.
>>After graduating in university and taking a job, I learned Japanese for overseas training purposes for 6 months.

Japanese was relatively easier than French or English because the word order is almost similar from that of other 2 languages.

>>Japanese was relatively easier than French or English because the word order is almost similar from that of the other 2 languages.
But Among all language i have learned, English is most difficult.

>>But among those languages, I can say that English is most difficult.
The reason is because even though i have been learning English for long time, 45 years, from middle school to now, I am poor at Englis

>>The reason is because even though I have been learning English for a long time, 45 years, from middle school to now, I am poor in English.

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