Homework 9/13
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think sending your loved ones to nursing homes is a kind of abandonment? Why?
It's difficult to think it as abandonment.
We need to think more comprehensively and look from a distance.
Showing their suffering to someone can be another pain especially in the case of a dementia.
In addition, We all are not professional nurses and have a our occupation.
We can care of them who stay in nursing homes and there are professionals all the time.
They can make friends at there and have a chance to make a sympathy each other.
I think it's not important this act, to send their loved one to another place.
The important thing is to care them steadily and give them love.
Thank you for good feedback. And I'm looking for today's class!
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian! :)
How\'s your Thursday going?
I hope that you are doing great!!
Anyway, you are welcome! It\'s my pleasure!^^
Thank you for dong your homework as well :)..
Keep up the good job!
See ya later :)..
~ T. Lorna^-^
>> It\'s difficult to think about it as an abandonment.
We need to think more comprehensively and look from a distance.
We need to think more comprehensively and look from a distance.
>> Correct!
Showing their suffering to someone can be another pain especially in the case of a dementia.
Showing their suffering to someone can be another pain especially in the case of a dementia.
>> Showing their suffering to someone by bringing them into a nursing home can result to another pain especially in the case of a person who is suffering from dementia.
In addition, We all are not professional nurses and have a our occupation.
In addition, We all are not professional nurses and have a our occupation.
>> However, we are not professional nurses and we also have our own occupation.
We can care of them who stay in nursing homes and there are professionals all the time.
We can care of them who stay in nursing homes and there are professionals all the time.
>> So, bringing them into a nursing home where there are nurses who can take care of them is okay.
They can make friends at there and have a chance to make a sympathy each other.
They can make friends at there and have a chance to make a sympathy each other.
>> They can make friends there and they can have the chance to sympathize others and vice versa.
I think it\'s not important this act, to send their loved one to another place.
I think it\'s not important this act, to send their loved one to another place.
>> I think it is not a big deal if we send our loved ones to a nursing home.
The important thing is to care them steadily and give them love.
The important thing is to care them steadily and give them love.
>> The important thing is, we, as their loved ones can take care of them and love them no matter what.
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