Homework 9
학생이 쓴 원문
What characteristics do students want their teachers to possess? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
I think students want that teachers possess kindness, sympathy, fun.
First, kindness is very important because students should not get a heartache.
Second, sympathy is very important because of making a good relationship between students and teacher.
Third, fun is very important because of participating students in the class more and more.
So, teachers have to endeavor to know student\'s want.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful day, Ku [이름]! That is correct. Students are expecting their teachers to be kind, empathetic, and kind. I know that you will be a great elementary school teacher someday because you possess these characteristics. Stay humble and kind. Take care!~T. Lyn
I think students want that teachers possess kindness, sympathy, fun.
>>I think students want their teachers to be kind, empathetic, and fun.
First, kindness is very important because students should not get a heartache.
First, kindness is very important because students should not get a heartache.
>>Firstly, kindness is very important because students should not feel hurt such as headache.
Second, sympathy is very important because of making a good relationship between students and teacher.
Second, sympathy is very important because of making a good relationship between students and teacher.
>>Second, empathy is also very important because it creates good relationships between students and teachers.
Third, fun is very important because of participating students in the class more and more.
Third, fun is very important because of participating students in the class more and more.
>>Lastly, fun is very important as more students participate in class.
So, teachers have to endeavor to know student\'s want.
So, teachers have to endeavor to know student\'s want.
>>That\'s right. Teachers must strive to know what their students want.
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