Homework 9/15
학생이 쓴 원문
The beautiful thing about learning is that no one can take it away from you.
There is another sentence same as it in Korea,"You don't give those things that you learn to anyone."
This means, the thing that you learned is belonging to you, not me.
A lot of elders including my parents and teachers liked to use this sentence when I avoided to study.
On a second thought, that's really correct.
I will encounter a lot of challenges and misfortune.
And I can lose and get my wealth, money, honors during my life.
But no matter what happen, I don't lose my experiences and lessons that I learned by myself.
And I can stand up again and again by using those things, so long as those things are shining in my mind.
I hope you to have a nice weekend, Lorna.
And i used the expression(On a second thought) that I learned today.^^
강사 첨삭
Hello hello, Ian!:)
I hope that you are just enjoying this Friday night over there.
I really like your persistence in learning English. Good job! I like it! :)
Learn it and use it! This way, you can easily learn and retain what you have learned.
Have a nice weekend at work too, Ian!!^^
I will see you on Monday.
~ T. Lorna^-^
>> There is a sentence that has the same meaning with this sentence in Korea and it goes like this, \"You don\'t give those things that you learned to anyone.\"
This means, the thing that you learned is belonging to you, not me.
This means, the thing that you learned is belonging to you, not me.
>> This means that the things that you learned belongs to you and not me.
A lot of elders including my parents and teachers liked to use this sentence when I avoided to study.
A lot of elders including my parents and teachers liked to use this sentence when I avoided to study.
>> A lot of elders including my parents and teachers used this sentence as an advise when I avoided to study.
On a second thought, that\'s really correct.
On a second thought, that\'s really correct.
>> On a second thought, they are really correct.
I will encounter a lot of challenges and misfortune.
I will encounter a lot of challenges and misfortune.
>> I might encounter a lot of challenges and misfortune in my life.
And I can lose and get my wealth, money, honors during my life.
And I can lose and get my wealth, money, honors during my life.
>> I can lose or maybe become wealthy and honorable in this life.
But no matter what happen, I don\'t lose my experiences and lessons that I learned by myself.
But no matter what happen, I don\'t lose my experiences and lessons that I learned by myself.
>> But no matter what happens, I won\'t lose the lessons and skills that I learned from my experiences.
And I can stand up again and again by using those things, so long as those things are shining in my mind.
>> I can use these lessons and skills to stand up again and again as long as these things are still shining in my mind.
I hope you to have a nice weekend, Lorna.
And I can stand up again and again by using those things, so long as those things are shining in my mind.
>> I can use these lessons and skills to stand up again and again as long as these things are still shining in my mind.
I hope you to have a nice weekend, Lorna.
>> Correct!
And i used the expression(On a second thought) that I learned today.^^
And i used the expression(On a second thought) that I learned today.^^
>> And oh, I used the expression(On a second thought) that I learned today.^^
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