Homework 9.17
학생이 쓴 원문
What would happen if there were no cars, buses, trains, boats, or planes? How would this c[이름]ge your life?
: If there are no means of transportation, our society will very c[이름]ge.
In terms of science aspect, a video call technology will be extremely developed.
Because we can\'t see our relative or friends lived far away.
And, If people go to work, they will have to wake up very early because they can\'t ride any vehicle.
I\'m sure this transportation have a enormous impact on us.
강사 첨삭
1. If there are no means of transportation, our society will very c[이름]ge.
>>If there are no means of transportation, our society will c[이름]ge much.
2. In terms of science aspect, a video call technology will be extremely developed.
>>In terms of science aspect, video call technology will be extremely developed.
3. Because we can\'t see our relative or friends lived far away.
>>Because we can\'t see our relatives or friends who live far away.
4. And, If people go to work, they will have to wake up very early because they can\'t ride any vehicle.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Moreover, when people go to work, they will have to wake up very early in the morning since they can\'t ride any vehicle.
5. I\'m sure this transportation have a enormous impact on us.
>>I\'m sure this loss of transportation will have an enormous impact on us.
Very good essay, Michelle!
-T. Melody ^^
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