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2014-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. Sorry too late for homework. I was so busy. "What's the most encouraging book you've ever read?" - There are a lot of books that influence for my life. But if I choose a book, That is a "Letters to his son" (written by Philip Chesterfield) Do you know that? I like that book. That is clear and good. If you haven't read yet, I recommend to read it.

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Hi there Mr. [이름]^^ Thank you for doing your homework even though it\'s late! Don\'t worry about it, the important thing is that you did your homework! Anyway, I like reading books but I haven\'t read that yet. I will try to llok for that online! Thank for recommending it to me! Anyway, I\'ll call you later! Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^Sorry too late for homework. >> Sorry, I did my homework late. I was so busy.>> CORRECT^^\"What\'s the most encouraging book you\'ve ever read?\"- There are a lot of books that influence for my life. >> There are a lot of books that influenced my life. But if I choose a book, That is a \"Letters to his son\" (written by Philip Chesterfield) >> But if I have to choose one book, it would be \"Letters to his son\" written by Philip Chesterfield.Do you know that? I like that book. >> CORRECT^^ That is clear and good. >> It\'s clear and good.If you haven\'t read yet, I recommend to read it. >> If you haven\'t read it yet, I recommend you to read it.

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