HOMEWORK 9/17, About my parent
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Oh!!!
I am sorry to hear about your parents but I know that you have good memories to remember with them.
It\'s okay we can talk about my parents tomorrow, actually, I don\'t have many memories with them because they died when I was young.
Take care!!!!
T. Jeny
There is no parents now.
>>I don\'t have my parents now.
>>My parents are gone now.
My parents were same age.
>>My parents are of the same age.
They got married at 1955 for 10 years, Their age was 19 old.
>>They got married when they were 19 years old in 1955 and they were together for 10 years.
>>They got married when they were 19 years old in 1955 for 10 years.
His job was teacher of elementary school in small rural village.
>>My father was an elementary school teacher in a small village.
But, He died suddenly at 1964, 29 old., When i was 5 years old.
>>But suddenly, he died at the age of 29 in 1964, when I was 5 years old.
I don\'t still know why he died.
>>I still don\'t know the reason why he died.
I heard from many neighbors that he was very honorable life.
>>I heard from our neighbors that he was an honorable man.
He was kind and handsome man.
>>He was a kind and handsome man.
After his death, She only brought up three children, I am a secnd one.
>>I am the second child and my mother brought the three of us.
At that time Women were not able to get job easily.
>>At that time, it was difficult for women to look for a job.
Then, She went through many hardships to raise her children.
>>She went through hardships in raising her children.
But She died in a bus accident at 1993, 59 old.
>>Unfortunately, she died in a bus accident in 1993 at the age of 59.
I still tears whenever I think them.
>>I still cry whenever I think of them.
I still respect my parents, so I am living so as not to derogate fame of them.
>>I still respect my parents, so I won\'t derogate my memories of them.
I am pity, am not i?
>>Don\'t have pity on me.
Jenny, Don\'t worry about.
>>Jenny, don\'t worry about me.
I am very bright man.
>>I am a very bright man.
I want to hear about your parents or family at tomorrow class, If you don\'t mind.
>>I want to hear about your parents or family tomorrow during our class, if you don\'t mind.
Have a nice day.
>>correct
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