Homework 9.18
학생이 쓴 원문
What are some nutritious foods that you like?
: I know nutritious foods are good for my body, but I hate eating vegetables.
But I like to eat garlic. I can\'t eat meat except garlic.
My level of immunity is so low. So I try to eat some nutritious foods.
강사 첨삭
1. I know nutritious foods are good for my body, but I hate eating vegetables.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I hate eating vegetables even though I know it\'s good for my health.
2. But I like to eat garlic.
>>CORRECT
OR>>But, I like eating garlic.
3. I can\'t eat meat except garlic.
>>I can\'t eat meat except with garlic.
4. My level of immunity is so low.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I have low immunity.
5. So I try to eat some nutritious foods.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So, I at least try to eat some nutritious foods.
Nice essay, Michelle.
- T. Melody ^^
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