homework(9/18)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello chelsea, again. ^^;;
I don't like to get angry.
I think that angry is not a way of solution about some problem.
Conversation is a sharing of thinking. But we miss a conversation.
We don't try to understand the opposite party. Just they say to themselves.
When we are angry, especially do that.
At the first, We have to understand someone.
But that is difficult.
I think you should not get angry.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again Mr. [이름]^^
Thank you again for doing your homework! I agree with you! Being angry won\'t solve anything. It could worsen the situation!
Anyway, please check those corrections.
I\'ll see you tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Hello chelsea, again. ^^;;>> CORRECT^^I don\'t like to get angry.
>> I don\'t like getting angry.I think that angry is not a way of solution about some problem.
>> I think gettiing angry is not a way to solve some problems.Conversation is a sharing of thinking.
>> Conversation is about sharing your opinions.
But we miss a conversation.
>> But we misunderstand the tru meaning of converstation.We don\'t try to understand the opposite party.
>> We don\'t try to understand opinions of the opposite party.
Just they say to themselves.
>> They just say it to themselves.When we are angry, especially do that.
>> When we are angry, we usually do that.At the first, We have to understand someone.
>> At first, we have to understand someone.But that is difficult.
>> CORRECT^^I think you should not get angry.
>> CORRECT^^
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