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2014-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hello chelsea, again. ^^;; I don't like to get angry. I think that angry is not a way of solution about some problem. Conversation is a sharing of thinking. But we miss a conversation. We don't try to understand the opposite party. Just they say to themselves. When we are angry, especially do that. At the first, We have to understand someone. But that is difficult. I think you should not get angry.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Mr. [이름]^^ Thank you again for doing your homework! I agree with you! Being angry won\'t solve anything. It could worsen the situation! Anyway, please check those corrections. I\'ll see you tomorrow^^ ~T.Chelsea Hello chelsea, again. ^^;;>> CORRECT^^I don\'t like to get angry. >> I don\'t like getting angry.I think that angry is not a way of solution about some problem. >> I think gettiing angry is not a way to solve some problems.Conversation is a sharing of thinking. >> Conversation is about sharing your opinions. But we miss a conversation. >> But we misunderstand the tru meaning of converstation.We don\'t try to understand the opposite party. >> We don\'t try to understand opinions of the opposite party. Just they say to themselves. >> They just say it to themselves.When we are angry, especially do that. >> When we are angry, we usually do that.At the first, We have to understand someone. >> At first, we have to understand someone.But that is difficult. >> CORRECT^^I think you should not get angry. >> CORRECT^^

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