Homework 9/18
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How often do you eat out? Do you prefer to eat out or eat at home? Why?
I bet most of people in the world prefer to eat out.
Surely, I prefer to eat out, too.
Because I can try unique and exotic foods that my mom cannot make at restaurants.
Though my mother's food tastes good, I want to try special, exotic food like pasta, Tom-yam-goong.
But I know I cannot eat out everyday.
Because I should spend a lot of money and time.
Another reason I like to eat out is that eating out means having a meal with someone like family or friends.
It's been a long day to live alone, so sometimes I hope to eat together.
On a second thought, What I need might be eating with family together, not just eating out.
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>> I bet that most people in the world prefer to eat out.
Surely, I prefer to eat out, too.
Surely, I prefer to eat out, too.
>> Correct!
Because I can try unique and exotic foods that my mom cannot make at restaurants.
Because I can try unique and exotic foods that my mom cannot make at restaurants.
>> Because in this way, I can try unique and exotic food that my mom can\'t make.
Though my mother\'s food tastes good, I want to try special, exotic food like pasta, Tom-yam-goong.
Though my mother\'s food tastes good, I want to try special, exotic food like pasta, Tom-yam-goong.
>> Though my mother\'s food tastes good, I still want to try special and exotic food like pasta and tom-yam-goong.
But I know I can not eat out everyday. Because I should spend a lot of money and time.
But I know I can not eat out everyday. Because I should spend a lot of money and time.
>> But I know that I can not eat out everyday because I should spend a lot of money and time.
Another reason I like to eat out is that eating out means having a meal with someone like family or friends.
Another reason I like to eat out is that eating out means having a meal with someone like family or friends.
>> One of the reasons why I like to eat out is that eating out means having a meal with someone like family or friends.
It\'s been a long day to live alone, so sometimes I hope to eat together.
It\'s been a long day to live alone, so sometimes I hope to eat together.
>> It\'s been a long day for me living alone so sometimes I would like to eat together with my family or friends.
On a second thought, What I need might be eating with family together, not just eating out.
On a second thought, What I need might be eating with family together, not just eating out.
>> On a second thought, what I need might be eating together with my family and not just eating out.
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