Homework(9/18) : What do I learn more from, mistakes or success ?
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강사 첨삭
I do believe that you can really improve your skills in English. Continue to have the passion in learning English because I know you can be successful.
Take care.
T. Jeny
Friend Jen.
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I could not take a lesson today.
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Sorry for not answering your several calls.
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During my public holiday for 5 days,there were many things to do in physically.
>>During my public holiday for 5 days, there were many physical activities that I have to do.
i went out to hike for all day, to ride twice for long distance and to watch pro baseball game on site.
>>I went out for a hike for the whole day, rode the bike twice for long distance and watched pro baseball game on site.
I was so tired due to these, i could not wake up today.
>>I was so tired and couldn\'t get up today.
I will certainly attend to next class. See you Wednesday. Bye sam.
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I learn both from finding out that i have made mistakes and from my successful actions.
>>I\'ve learned from both finding out my mistakes and from my successful actions.
Everyone makes mistakes.
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Someone receive the reason of mistake but someone consider the reason as luck.
>>Someone should accept his mistakes and consider is as luck.
The former does not repeat the same mistakes, but the latter do repeat the same mistakes.
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Fortunately i have a positive mind that is willing to learn from anything such as mistakes, successful actions, and anyone such as my son and daughter and even child.
>>Fortunately, I have a positive mind that is willing to learn from anything such as mistakes, successful actions, and from anyone such as my son,daughter and even from children.
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