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학생이 쓴 원문
I think people change.
Everyone is not changed, but someone is changed.
In my case, I was changed since having my daughter.
I want to be good father for my daughter.
So, I am trying to be good man. I don't know whether I'm a good father.
But I think better than before.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]^^
I agree with you! People can change if they really want to. But sometimes I think that people don\'t change, they will always be like that or they have always been like that. They were just scared showing who they trully are, so they build up walls not wanting people to know them.
Anyway, it\'s really complicated for me.
I made some corrections. I\'ll see you tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
I think people change.
>> CORRECT^^Everyone is not changed, but someone is changed.
>> Everyone doesn\'t change but someine can change.In my case, I was changed since having my daughter.
>> In my case, I changed when I had my daughter.I want to be good father for my daughter.
>> I want to be a good father to my daughter.So, I am trying to be good man.
>> So, I\'m trying to be a good man.
I don\'t know whether I\'m a good father.
>> CORRECT^^But I think better than before.
>> But I think I am better than before.
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