Homework 9/19

2017-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

학생이 쓴 원문

What are some of the things that you do not give as gifts in your country? Why? In Korea, though seaweed soup is one of popular soups, students don't eat a seaweed soup when they are getting exam. Seaweed is regarded as symbol of dropping because of its slippery body. And I don't give shoes to the lover as a gift. Because there are rumors that if I give shoes to the lover, then she will leave. I know It's just rumors and superstition. I think there might be no gifts that are irritating the people usually. But no matter how gorgeous gifts, if I don't consider situation of the people that get gifts, it would be rude or impolite to them. If I don't consider their own situation, even though I give the present to them, they will swear me.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, Ian!:)

Happy Wednesday to you over there.

How are you doing today?

Great job for doing your homework.

I will see you later!:)


~ T. Lorna^-^


In Korea, though seaweed soup is one of popular soups, students don\'t eat a seaweed soup when they are getting exam.

>> Though seaweed soup is one of the popular soups in Korea, students don\'t eat soup when they are about to have their exam.
Seaweed is regarded as symbol of dropping because of its slippery body.

>> Seaweed is regarded as a symbol of dropping because of its slippery texture.
And I don\'t give shoes to the lover as a gift.

>> Moreover, I don\'t give shoes as a gift to my lover.
Because there are rumors that if I give shoes to the lover, then she will leave.

>> Because there are rumors that if we give shoes to our lover then she might leave us.
I know It\'s just rumors and superstition.

>> Correct!

BUT:
>> It\'s should be \'it\'s\' because it\'s not at the beginning of the sentence.:)

I think there might be no gifts that are irritating the people usually.

>> I think there\'s no gift that is irritatiing to the people.
But no matter how gorgeous gifts, if I don\'t consider situation of the people that get gifts, it would be rude or impolite to them.

>> No matter how gorgeous my gift is if I won\'t consider the situation of that person who will receive my gift then I think it would be rude or impolite for him.
If I don\'t consider their own situation, even though I give the present to them, they will swear me.

>> Even if I will give a present to him if I won\'t consider his situation then I think he will still swear me.

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