Homework 9.2 essay
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. When do you feel most energized? What do you like to do with that energy?
A. I feel energized when I ate my favorite food fully. And I like to exercise with that energy.
Exercising makes us healthy. Also, I feel energized after I finished my daily works.
So I like to watch movie with some snacks after I finished all of it.
강사 첨삭
1. I feel energized when I ate my favorite food fully.
>>I feel energized after fully eating my favorite food.
2. And I like to exercise with that energy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>And I prefer to exercise with that energy.
3. Exercising makes us healthy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Exercise makes us healthy.
4. Also, I feel energized after I finished my daily works.
>>CORRECT
>>Also, I feel energized after finishing my daily task.
5. So I like to watch movie with some snacks after I finished all of it.
>>So I like to watch a movie with some snacks after I finished all of it.
Good job, Michelle!
- T. Melody ^^
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