Homework 9/21
학생이 쓴 원문
Absence makes the heart grow fonder
'The beauty of blank' is important conception in the Korean painting.
A lot of Korean painters in the middle-age used this conception into their painting.
Absence means another existence as 'empty' and makes people conceive and imagine rest of painting.
And I can see absence in the Korean literature, too.
Because many people in Korea suffered 'the period of loss' resulted by Korean war.
That's the reason that most Korean feel fonder with absence.
It's similar in personal love.
Whoever is active and motivated, keeping doing one's best to love someone is difficult.
Proper absence make me feel how invaluable she is.
Absence definitely makes the heart grow fonder.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian!:)
Happy Friday to you over there.
How\'s your day?
Very good in doing your homework.
I will see you later.
~T. Lorna^-^
>> \"The Beauty of Blank\" is an important concept in the Korean painting.
A lot of Korean painters in the middle-age used this conception into their painting.
A lot of Korean painters in the middle-age used this conception into their painting.
>> A lot of Korean painters in the middle-age used this concept into their paintings.
Absence means another existence as \'empty\' and makes people conceive and imagine rest of painting.
Absence means another existence as \'empty\' and makes people conceive and imagine rest of painting.
>> Absence means another existence as in \'empty\' and makes people conceive and imagine the rest of the paintings.
And I can see absence in the Korean literature, too.
And I can see absence in the Korean literature, too.
>> Moreover, I can see absence in the Korean literature, too.
Because many people in Korea suffered \'the period of loss\' resulted by Korean war.
Because many people in Korea suffered \'the period of loss\' resulted by Korean war.
>> Because many people in Korea suffered \'the period of loss\' resulted by the Korean war.
That\'s the reason that most Korean feel fonder with absence.
That\'s the reason that most Korean feel fonder with absence.
>> This is the reason why most Korean feel fonder towards absence.
It\'s similar in personal love.
It\'s similar in personal love.
>> It is similar to our love with someone from the opposite sex.
Whoever is active and motivated, keeping doing one\'s best to love someone is difficult.
Whoever is active and motivated, keeping doing one\'s best to love someone is difficult.
>> Whoever is active, motivated and do his best to love someone can even experience difficulties.
Proper absence make me feel how invaluable she is.
Proper absence make me feel how invaluable she is.
>> Leave of absence makes me feel how invaluable she is.
OR:
>> (Do you mean?) Absence makes me feel how valuable she is to me.
Absence definitely makes the heart grow fonder.
>> (Do you mean?) Absence makes me feel how valuable she is to me.
Absence definitely makes the heart grow fonder.
>> Correct!
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