HOMEWORK 9/22, prepositon

2015-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear [Name]. I think you have lived hard since your acccident at 6 years old. I will hope God bless you in the future. Have a bright tuesday! 1. Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen. 2. Sun’s heat and lightning are the two natural causes of wildfires. 3. The huge popularity of the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed at the establishment of the Indian Premier League. 4. Many players have been accused of fixing matches. 5. Many environmentalists have raised concerns about the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.

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Hello Oh!!! I know God is always at our side. Thank you!!! I am looking for to talk with you. I do hope that we can both do other best in improving your skills in English.Determination and perseverance move the world;thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In spite of difficulties, it could help you know your strength and weaknesses.  T. Jeny Dear [Name]. >>correctI think you have lived hard since your acccident at 6 years old. >>I think it was difficult for you since your parent\'s died, for you were only 6 years old at that time.I will hope God bless you in the future. >>correctHave a bright tuesday!>>correct1. Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen.>>Edison had become totally deaf by the time he turned fifteen.2. Sun’s heat and lightning are the two natural causes of wildfires.>>correct3. The huge popularity of the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed at the establishment of the Indian Premier League.>>The huge popularity of the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed to the establishment of the Indian Premier League. 4. Many players have been accused of fixing matches.>>correct5. Many environmentalists have raised concerns about the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches. >>correct

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