HOMEWORK 9/24, eating
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강사 첨삭
Hello Oh,
We need to have a good way of communication because it can really make us feel good.
In addition, having a good heart will make us happy that is why we can laugh.
I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.
Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.
T. Jeny
Dear [Name].
>>correct
Thanks to you everyday.
>>Thank you for our daily class.
>>Thanks for everyday.
For breakfast,I always drink the mixed juice made by grinding banana, roast grain powder and milk on weekdays.
>>I always drink mixed juice made by grind banana, roast grain powder and milk for breakfast on weekdays.
And, I often eat the meals with my teams in the cafeteria of a company in the building next door for lunch.
>>And I often eat meals with my team in the cafeteria at a company building next door for lunch.
There are no fast foods at that restaurant.
>>There are no fast food restaurant.
For dinner, I eat the meals that my wife cooks, if possible.
>>If possible, I eat my wife\'s home cook meal for dinner.
Sometimes when she is tired, we go out to eat meat.
>>correct
Because it is the only time to be able to talk with my wife.
>>Because that\'s the only time I could talk to my wife.
The above is the my routine of eating on the weeks.
>>That is my routine for my meals in a week.
However, when I am at home on weekends, I mainly eat RaMyun, you know, or, go out to eat a rice cake(so called \"TtukBokKi\" in Korean) outside.
>>However, when I am at home on the weekends, I usually eat RaMyun. Do You Know it? Sometimes, I also go out to eat rice cake or what we call, \"TtukBokKi.\"
The only dishes I can do is boiling RaMyun.
>>The only dish that I can do is to boil Ramyun.
I am most fond of RaMyun and TtukBokKi of fast food.
>>I am fond of RaMyun and TtukBokKi.
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