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2015-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear [Name]. Thanks to you everyday. For breakfast,I always drink the mixed juice made by grinding banana, roast grain powder and milk on weekdays. And, I often eat the meals with my teams in the cafeteria of a company in the building next door for lunch. There are no fast foods at that restaurant. For dinner, I eat the meals that my wife cooks, if possible. Sometimes when she is tired, we go out to eat meat. Because it is the only time to be able to talk with my wife. The above is the my routine of eating on the weeks. However, when I am at home on weekends, I mainly eat RaMyun, you know, or, go out to eat a rice cake(so called "TtukBokKi" in Korean) outside. The only dishes I can do is boiling RaMyun. I am most fond of RaMyun and TtukBokKi of fast food.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

We need to have a good way of communication because it can really make us feel good.

In addition, having a good heart will make us happy that is why we can laugh.

I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.

Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.

T. Jeny

 

Dear [Name].

>>correct
Thanks to you everyday.
>>Thank you for our daily class.

>>Thanks for everyday.
For breakfast,I always drink the mixed juice made by grinding banana, roast grain powder and milk on weekdays.
>>I always drink mixed juice made by grind banana, roast grain powder and milk for breakfast on weekdays.
And, I often eat the meals with my teams in the cafeteria of a company in the building next door for lunch.

>>And I often eat meals with my team in the cafeteria at a company building next door for lunch.
There are no fast foods at that restaurant.
>>There are no fast food restaurant.
For dinner, I eat the meals that my wife cooks, if possible.

>>If possible, I eat my wife\'s home cook meal for dinner.
Sometimes when she is tired, we go out to eat meat.

>>correct
Because it is the only time to be able to talk with my wife.
>>Because that\'s the only time I could talk to my wife.
The above is the my routine of eating on the weeks.
>>That is my routine for my meals in a week.
However, when I am at home on weekends, I mainly eat RaMyun, you know, or, go out to eat a rice cake(so called \"TtukBokKi\" in Korean) outside.

>>However, when I am at home on the weekends, I usually eat RaMyun. Do You Know it? Sometimes, I also go out to eat rice cake or what we call, \"TtukBokKi.\"

The only dishes I can do is boiling RaMyun.

>>The only dish that I can do is to boil Ramyun.
I am most fond of RaMyun and TtukBokKi of fast food.

>>I am fond of RaMyun and TtukBokKi.

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