Homework 9/25
학생이 쓴 원문
A good example is the best sermon.
Hundreds of stories that kids read have different contents.
But lessons from all of fairy tales are similar with each other, 'encouraging good and punishing evil'
Though stories have a same lesson for kids, they teach a lesson to kids in their own ways.
This is the power of story-telling.
Every kids concentrate the man(or she) in the story and emphasize them.
As a result, though I don't teach kids a concrete lesson about that, they know they should be good, not bad.
Here is the reason why a example is important.
A example and story have contents and they are passed efficiently to people Especially in case of learning languages.
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>> Kids read hundreds of stories that have different contents.
But lessons from all of fairy tales are similar with each other, \'encouraging good and punishing evil\'
But lessons from all of fairy tales are similar with each other, \'encouraging good and punishing evil\'
>> But lessons from these fairy tales are just similar with each other, encouraging good and punishing evil.
Though stories have a same lesson for kids, they teach a lesson to kids in their own ways.
Though stories have a same lesson for kids, they teach a lesson to kids in their own ways.
>> All stories contain lessons that teaches kids depending on their perception of the story.
This is the power of story-telling.
This is the power of story-telling.
>> Correct!
Every kids concentrate the man(or she) in the story and emphasize them.
Every kids concentrate the man(or she) in the story and emphasize them.
>> Kids usually concentrate on the traits that is being portrayed by the character of the story.
As a result, though I don\'t teach kids a concrete lesson about that, they know they should be good, not bad.
As a result, though I don\'t teach kids a concrete lesson about that, they know they should be good, not bad.
>> As a result, they will learn which is bad and which is good.
Here is the reason why a example is important.
Here is the reason why a example is important.
>> This is the reason why example is more effective than giving sermon.
A example and story have contents and they are passed efficiently to people Especially in case of learning languages.
A example and story have contents and they are passed efficiently to people Especially in case of learning languages.
>> Giving examples through a story is more effective and efficient to the listener especially in the case of those who are learning languages.
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