Homework 9/26
학생이 쓴 원문
"A picture is worth a thousand words."
I think if the world is black and white, culture like painting, music, literature make the world colorful.
Art is most efficient way to express one's thoughts and opinions.
And every artists try to express their opinions in their own fashion like music, picture or something.
It is very difficult to explain 'love' in writing.
Even if someone who doesn't know about love read a meaning of love by a dictionary, I'm not sure he can understand it.
But when he see the paintings of Chagall especially painting named 'lovers',he would understand about love.
And If someone want to know about 'peace', then let him listen a song 'imagine' of John lennon.
Like these examples, a artwork including a picture is more than a thousand words.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian!!:)
How are you doing this Friday?
I hope that you are doing great over there?
Great job in doing your homework.
I will see you this afternoon!
~T. Lorna^-^
I think if the world is black and white, culture like painting, music, literature make the world colorful.
>> I think if the world is black and white then the culture in painting, music, and literature makes the world colorful.
Art is most efficient way to express one\'s thoughts and opinions.
Art is most efficient way to express one\'s thoughts and opinions.
>> Art is the most efficient way to express one\'s thoughts and opinions.
And every artists try to express their opinions in their own fashion like music, picture or something.
And every artists try to express their opinions in their own fashion like music, picture or something.
>> Every artists try to express their opinions in their own ways like music, picture or something.
It is very difficult to explain \'love\' in writing.
It is very difficult to explain \'love\' in writing.
>> Correct!
Even if someone who doesn\'t know about love read a meaning of love by a dictionary, I\'m not sure he can understand it.
Even if someone who doesn\'t know about love read a meaning of love by a dictionary, I\'m not sure he can understand it.
>> Someone who doesn\'t know about love but will read the meaning of love through a dictionary will not surely understand it.
But when he see the paintings of Chagall especially painting named \'lovers\',he would understand about love.
>> But when he see the paintings of Chagall, especially the painting named \'Lovers\' then he might understand it.
And If someone want to know about \'peace\', then let him listen a song \'imagine\' of John lennon.
And If someone want to know about \'peace\', then let him listen a song \'imagine\' of John lennon.
>> Moreover, if someone wants to know about \'peace\', then let him listen to a song entitled \'Imagine\' by John Lennon.
Like these examples, a artwork including a picture is more than a thousand words.
>> With regards to these examples, an artwork including a picture is more than a thousand words.
Like these examples, a artwork including a picture is more than a thousand words.
>> With regards to these examples, an artwork including a picture is more than a thousand words.
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