Homework 9.28
학생이 쓴 원문
Should young children be required to learn English? If so, from what age?
: I think young children should not be required to learn English.
Because, the concept or grammar that we learned when we are young, it\'s not help to our English skill.
I think 14~16 age is proper to learn English. In my opining, Korean and Math subjects are more important for young children.
강사 첨삭
1. I think young children should not be required to learn English.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think there shouldn\'t be a requirement for young kids to learn English.
2. Because, the concept or grammar that we learned when we are young, it\'s not help to our English skill.
>>Because the concept of grammar that we learned when we were young is not helpful to our English skills.
3. I think 14~16 age is proper to learn English.
>>I think fourteen to sixteen is the proper age to learn English.
4. In my opining, Korean and Math subjects are more important for young children.
>>In my opinion, Korean and Math subjects are more important for kids.
Good point, Michelle!
- T. Melody ^^
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