Homework 9/28
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Do you think it is important to wear fashionable clothes? Why? Why not?
I think that it is important to stay fashionable.
But I think "to stay fashionable" means to be in current trend including visual,exterior and interior things.
To some, it can be more important to be fashionable visually.
But they are so sensitive to trend that they tend to spend their time and money to buy item like shoes and clothes.
Though I also read some fashion magazine to see brand new item, it's just to not look as a jerk.
I think it's more important to stay fashionable mind than to look fashionable only visually.
It is hard and needed more expanses to stay fashionable mind.
I should read a daily newspaper, sometimes write a essay and meet a lot of new people.
I think people who have a fashionable mind are more attractive than people careful of only their visual fashion.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian!!:)
How are you doing this Friday?
I hope that you are doing great over there?
Great job in doing your homework.
I will see you this afternoon!
~T. Lorna^-^
>> Correct!
But I think \"to stay fashionable\" means to be in current trend including visual,exterior and interior things.
But I think \"to stay fashionable\" means to be in current trend including visual,exterior and interior things.
>> But I think \"to stay fashionable\" means to be in a current trend including visual,exterior and interior things.
To some, it can be more important to be fashionable visually.
To some, it can be more important to be fashionable visually.
>> Correct!
But they are so sensitive to trend that they tend to spend their time and money to buy item like shoes and clothes.
But they are so sensitive to trend that they tend to spend their time and money to buy item like shoes and clothes.
>> But they might be so sensitive to what is trending that they tend to spend their time and money to buy items like shoes and clothes.
Though I also read some fashion magazine to see brand new item, it\'s just to not look as a jerk.
>> Though, I also read some fashion magazines to see brand new items and not just to look at it llike a jerk.
I think it\'s more important to stay fashionable mind than to look fashionable only visually.
I think it\'s more important to stay fashionable mind than to look fashionable only visually.
>> I think it\'s more important to stay fashionable in mind rather than to be visually fashionable.
It is hard and needed more expanses to stay fashionable mind.
It is hard and needed more expanses to stay fashionable mind.
>> It is hard and it needs more money to stay fashionable.
I should read a daily newspaper, sometimes write a essay and meet a lot of new people.
I should read a daily newspaper, sometimes write a essay and meet a lot of new people.
>> I should read a daily newspaper, sometimes write an essay and meet a lot of new people.
I think people who have a fashionable mind are more attractive than people careful of only their visual fashion.
I think people who have a fashionable mind are more attractive than people careful of only their visual fashion.
>> I think people who have a fashionable mind are more attractive than people who care only of their their outer appearances.
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