Homework(9/30): secret

2016-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jen. I had take a lesson only once this week. I am very being tired physically, but i don't know the reason. I think It is maybe due to my age. However, It's too sad to work hard at our public holiday,National Foundation Day, Oct-3rd 2016. But it is my job and role in our company. Pleas have a nice weekend and see you next Wednesday. = body = I don't like knowing and finding out others' secrets. Everyone has a lot of secrets he/she doesn't want to tell others. I wonder those and would like to know the reason why but I always wait for response until he/she wants to tell me in advance. I think It's my etiquette and consideration for him/her.

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Hello Oh I do commend you for writing an essay, I know that you really have the potentials in speaking the English language. You just have to be careful with your sentence construction. The process of writing an essay teaches a student how to research a topic and organize her thoughts into an introduction, a body and a conclusion. I know that this activity can help you improve your skills so keep it up!!!! Thank you very much and I hope you\'ll enjoy learning English!!! T. Jeny   Friend Jen. >>correctI had take a lesson only once this week. >>I\'ve taken a lesson only once this week.I am very being tired physically, but i don\'t know the reason. >>I am becoming very tired physically, but I don\'t know the reason.I think It is maybe due to my age. >>correctHowever, It\'s too sad to work hard at our public holiday,National Foundation Day, Oct-3rd 2016. >>However, it\'s too sad to work hard on a public holiday, National Foundation Day on Oct-3rd 2016.But it is my job and role in our company. >>correctPlease have a nice weekend and see you next Wednesday. >>correct= body = I don\'t like knowing and finding out others\' secrets. >>correctEveryone has a lot of secrets he/she doesn\'t want to tell others. >>correctI wonder those and would like to know the reason why but I always wait for response until he/she wants to tell me in advance.>>I wonder about it and I would like to know the reason why but I always wait for the response until he/she wants to tell it to me in advance.I think It\'s my etiquette and consideration for him/her. >>I think it\'s my etiquette and I consider his/her feelings.

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