Homework(9/30): secret
학생이 쓴 원문
Friend Jen.
I had take a lesson only once this week.
I am very being tired physically, but i don't know the reason.
I think It is maybe due to my age.
However, It's too sad to work hard at our public holiday,National Foundation Day, Oct-3rd 2016.
But it is my job and role in our company.
Pleas have a nice weekend and see you next Wednesday.
= body =
I don't like knowing and finding out others' secrets.
Everyone has a lot of secrets he/she doesn't want to tell others.
I wonder those and would like to know the reason why but I always wait for response until he/she wants to tell me in advance.
I think It's my etiquette and consideration for him/her.
강사 첨삭
Hello Oh
I do commend you for writing an essay, I know that you really have the potentials in speaking the English language. You just have to be careful with your sentence construction.
The process of writing an essay teaches a student how to research a topic and organize her thoughts into an introduction, a body and a conclusion. I know that this activity can help you improve your skills so keep it up!!!!
Thank you very much and I hope you\'ll enjoy learning English!!!
T. Jeny
Friend Jen.
>>correctI had take a lesson only once this week.
>>I\'ve taken a lesson only once this week.I am very being tired physically, but i don\'t know the reason.
>>I am becoming very tired physically, but I don\'t know the reason.I think It is maybe due to my age.
>>correctHowever, It\'s too sad to work hard at our public holiday,National Foundation Day, Oct-3rd 2016.
>>However, it\'s too sad to work hard on a public holiday, National Foundation Day on Oct-3rd 2016.But it is my job and role in our company.
>>correctPlease have a nice weekend and see you next Wednesday.
>>correct= body = I don\'t like knowing and finding out others\' secrets.
>>correctEveryone has a lot of secrets he/she doesn\'t want to tell others.
>>correctI wonder those and would like to know the reason why but I always wait for response until he/she wants to tell me in advance.>>I wonder about it and I would like to know the reason why but I always wait for the response until he/she wants to tell it to me in advance.I think It\'s my etiquette and consideration for him/her.
>>I think it\'s my etiquette and I consider his/her feelings.
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