Homework(9/5): Filling in the blanks.

2016-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear sam. I bought 2 bicycles for both my and wife's health last Sunday. As we get ages, i feel that our legs are being weak, therefore we decided to buy bicycle without any consideration for money. i ended up add one more hobby, in addition to playing guitar. i have to study Englisn during the week and have to practice the guitar and have to bike during the weekend. There are things for me to do. haha Have a wonderful Monday and see you Wednesday. sam. = body = 1. The higher you climb the colder it gets. 2. The more he reads the less he understands. 3. The older we grow the wiser we become. 4. The government should pay attention to the problems of the unemployed. 5. The faster you act the better it is. 6. They saw the criminal break open the door. 7. The poor exile was never seen his native land again. 8. The strike would have been called off if the workers’ demands had been granted.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!!

Great job on you homework!!!!

Believe that you can achieve your goals in English and you\'ll be successful.

Believe in yourself!!!!

T. Jeny

 

Dear sam.

>>correct
I bought 2 bicycles for both my and wife\'s health last Sunday.

>>I bought 2 bicycles for me and wife\'s health last Sunday.
As we get ages, i feel that our legs are being weak, therefore we decided to buy bicycle without any consideration for money.

>>As we age, I feel that our legs are becoming weak, therefore we decided to buy bicycles without considering the cost.
i ended up add one more hobby, in addition to playing guitar.

>>I ended up adding another hobby beside from playing the guitar.
i have to study Englisn during the week and have to practice the guitar and have to bike during the weekend.

>>I have to study English during the week, practice the guitar and bike during the weekend.
There are things for me to do. haha
>>correct
Have a wonderful Monday and see you Wednesday. sam.
>>Have a wonderful Monday and see you on Wednesday. sam.
= body =
1. The higher you climb the colder it gets.
>>correct
2. The more he reads the less he understands.
>>correct
3. The older we grow the wiser we become.
>>correct
4. The government should pay attention to the problems of the unemployed.
>>correct
5. The faster you act the better it is.
>>correct
6. They saw the criminal break open the door.
>>correct
7. The poor exile was never seen his native land again.
>>correct
8. The strike would have been called off if the workers’ demands had been granted
.

>>correct

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