Homework 9

ESSAY: What kind of media (TV, newspaper, etc) do you think is the most influential to young adults these days? As most of young adults have smart phone these days, the infulence of SNS(Social Network Service) became strong. Young adults check their SNS account such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter every minutes and absorb a lot of information and even rumors immediately. Next to TV, newspaper, SNS relay and spread out all the news immediately, so young adults got many news from SNS the first. Also, since SNS connects many friends, the news spread out very fast. Therefore SNS is the most infuluential to young adults.

Hi there [이름]!^^ How are you? Thank you for sending me this answer and I have the same observation as you did. A lot of young people rely on their social medias a lot that sometimes it unreasonable. I do facebook but I try to control it. How baout you?^^ T.Debby^^ Here are myu corrections for you today: As most of young adults have smart phone these days, the infulence of SNS(Social Network Service) became strong. >> CORRECT OR> SNS(Social Network Service) is becoming stronger with the popularity of smart phones these days. Young adults check their SNS account such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter every minutes and absorb a lot of information and even rumors immediately. >>  Young adults check their SNS account such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter every minute and absorb a lot of information and even rumors immediately. Next to TV, newspaper, SNS relay and spread out all the news immediately, so young adults got many news from SNS the first. >> Next to TV, newspaper, SNS relay and spread out all the news immediately, so young adults get many news from SNS first. Also, since SNS connects many friends, the news spread out very fast. Therefore SNS is the most infuluential to young adults. >> CORRECT OR> And since the exchange in SNS is very strong I think that it is the most influencial.