Homework #9
학생이 쓴 원문
1. "Dinner Plans"- Please complete the following sentence:
'If I could have dinner with any person, living or dead, it would be "Yoo, Jaesuck, Korea comedian" because he is the best comedian in our country and It would be difficult to find such a nice person like him.
He was a unknown comedian during ten years. But he didn't give up his dream.
And practice, practice, practice..
Finally, He became the most of famous comedian in our country.
He always take care of every people and always kind everyone. And he is very funny guy, so I want to learn his gag and wit.
Any body who hate Yoo,Jaesuck. So I want to meet and have a dinner with him.'
Lexi, Do you know Yoo, Jaesuck?
강사 첨삭
Hi there again!
Now I know Yoo, Jaesuck through your composition. Honestly, I don\'t know him. But I did research so I know that he is South Korea\'s \"MC of the nation\".
It just show that if you put your heart and work hard for your goals, you\'ll definitely get it. How about you, what goals do you have for yourself?
Hope to hear from you.
Teacher Lexi
1. \"Dinner Plans\"- Please complete the following sentence: \'If I could have dinner with any person, living or dead, it would be \"Yoo, Jaesuck, Korea comedian\" because he is the best comedian in our country and It would be difficult to find such a nice person like him.
>>\'If I could have dinner with any person, living or dead, it would be \"Yoo, Jaesuck, a Korean comedian\" because he is the best comedian in our country and it would be difficult to find such a nice person like him. He was a unknown comedian during ten years.
>>He was an unknown comedian tfor ten years.But he didn\'t give up his dream.>>Correct :)And practice, practice, practice..>>And he practice, practice, practice!Finally, He became the most of famous comedian in our country.>>Correct (no need for capitalization - he)He always take care of every people and always kind everyone.
>>He always takes care of every people and always kind to everyone.And he is very funny guy, so I want to learn his gag and wit. >>And he is a very funny guy so I want to learn his gag and wit.Any body who hate Yoo,Jaesuck.
>>Nobody hates Yoo, Jaesuck.So I want to meet and have a dinner with him.\'>>CorrectLexi, Do you know Yoo, Jaesuck?
>>Correct (No need for capitalization - do)
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