Homework #9

2015-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Adela

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], You said I seldom talk about my friends in the last comment. Well... most of my friends are living in other cities, we can hardly meet each other after graduation. Therefore, I get used to living alone. Q. What is your favorite book or movie, and why should people read or watch it? A. When I’m in hard times, I usually read this book, “Things which can be seen only if you should stop” written by haemin monk. I don’t believe God, and I have not religion. But I know it makes me feel calm. Not only I, but this book makes many people feel be consoled. I hope that someday the English version of this book will be published.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kate,

Thank you for your homework today.
Have a good weekend. Take care!

Dear [Name],
You said I seldom talk about my friends in the last comment.
>> You said I seldom talk to my friends in your last comment.
Well... most of my friends are living in other cities,
>> CORRECT
we can hardly meet each other after graduation.
>> we hardly meet each other after graduation.
Therefore, I get used to living alone.
>> CORRECT

Q. What is your favorite book or movie, and why should people read or watch it?

A. When I’m in hard times, I usually read this book,
>> CORRECT
“Things which can be seen only if you should stop” written by haemin monk.
>> CORRECT
I don’t believe God, and I have not religion. But I know it makes me feel calm.
>> I don’t believe in God, and I have no religion. But I know it makes me feel calm.
Not only I, but this book makes many people feel be consoled.
>> CORRECT
I hope that someday the English version of this book will be published.
>> CORRECT

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