Homework#9
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! it\'s Tuesday evening. Did you have a good day today?
Thank you for always motivating me to study English.
I absolutely agree with you saying. I\'ll study English more harder.
This is my homework.
HW#9 What was the most embarrassing moment in your life at work or at school?
When i was in the military, i give many presentations. Pre-data survey is really important before making a presentation.
I prepared materials for presentation. But, the man who worked with me threw away that.
So, I was really embarrased. while i was in chaos, my senior solider helped me to find materials.
There was just thirty minutes. Fortunately, we found the material at the garbage incinerator.
So, I could give a presention without problems.
This experience was the most embrassing moment in my life.
I think this happening is boring because i am not good at English well..
At that time, i was very embrassed and confused.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Just make sure to use the correct tenses of the verbs in your sentences.
Also, don\'t forget your capitalization at the start of your sentences.
Have a good day!
Here are my corrections.
When i was in the military, i give many presentations. Pre-data survey is really important before making a presentation.
>> When I was in the military, I delivered many presentations. Data pre-survey is really important before making a presentation.
I prepared materials for presentation. But, the man who worked with me threw away that.
I prepared materials for presentation. But, the man who worked with me threw away that.
>> I prepared materials for presentation but the man who worked with me threw that away.
So, I was really embarrased. while i was in chaos, my senior solider helped me to find materials.
So, I was really embarrased. while i was in chaos, my senior solider helped me to find materials.
>> So, I was really embarrassed. While I was in chaos, my senior soldier helped me to find the materials.
There was just thirty minutes. Fortunately, we found the material at the garbage incinerator.
There was just thirty minutes. Fortunately, we found the material at the garbage incinerator.
>> Correct!
So, I could give a presention without problems.
So, I could give a presention without problems.
>> So, I delivered the presentation without problems.
This experience was the most embrassing moment in my life.
This experience was the most embrassing moment in my life.
>> This experience was the most embarrassing moment in my life.
I think this happening is boring because i am not good at English well..
I think this happening is boring because i am not good at English well..
>> I think this happening is boring because I am not good at expressing myself in English.
At that time, i was very embrassed and confused.
At that time, i was very embrassed and confused.
>> At that time, I was very embarrassed and confused.
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