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2020-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I think I use my gadgets almost everyday. I think gadgets also include electronics. I use a keyboard and a mouse which are gadgets. And smartphone chargers are also gadgets. There is many gadgets around us. I guess almost people use everyday gadgets like me. 2. I think the advantages of using gadgets are very useful. Gadgets provide people convenient and happy. But I think the disadvantages of using gadgets are immoderately useful. Many people rely on gadgets too much and it makes people lazy. Almost everyone use it with nothing of think. Nowadays, if there is no gadgets in our life, our quality of life will be reduced. Therefore, sometimes I think people should stop to use gadgets and take a rest without gadgets.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Lucy

I think I use my gadgets almost everyday.
>>CORRECT!
I think gadgets also include electronics.
>>CORRECT!
I use a keyboard and a mouse which are gadgets.
>>CORRECT!
And smartphone chargers are also gadgets.
>>CORRECT!
There is many gadgets around us.
>>There are many gadgets around us.
I guess almost people use everyday gadgets like me.
>>CORRECT!
I think the advantages of using gadgets are very useful.
>>CORRECT!
Gadgets provide people convenient and happy.
>>Gadgets provide people\'s conveniece and happiness.
But I think the disadvantages of using gadgets are immoderately useful.
>>CORRECT!
Many people rely on gadgets too much and it makes people lazy.
>>CORRECT!
Almost everyone use it with nothing of think.
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays, if there is no gadgets in our life, our quality of life will be reduced.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, sometimes I think people should stop to use gadgets and take a rest without gadgets.
>>CORRECT!

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