homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [이름]! It was really a nice topic we have had today! Ha ha ha In this issue, we have opposite ideas. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
ESSAY: Where do our personalities come from? Are they genetically or environmentally acquired? Explain.
I think personality comes from origin of human nature.
>>> I think personality comes or originates from our human nature.
Because I know some people are from very bad and lowest condition of families. but they are so great people.
>>> I know some people who came from not so good family backgrounds but they still turned out as good people.
I think that natural personality cannot change depending on enviroments.
>>> I think that innate personalities cannot be changed by one\'s environment.
Personality seems like soul therfore It cannot be acquired.
>>> Our personality are like our souls so they cannot be externally acquired.
We are born with our own personalities again and again.
>>> We are born with our own innate personalities.
Am I so strict? because It means I don\'t give any chance to be able to change their personalities or I don\'t belive if someone promise to me change their personalities.
>>> Am I being conventional because I don\'t give chances for people to change their personalities? I just don\'t easily believe when people promise to change their personalities.
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