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2019-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

ESSAY: Where do our personalities come from? Are they genetically or environmentally acquired? Explain. I think personality comes from origin of human nature. Because I know some people are from very bad and lowest condition of families. but they are so great people. I think that natural personality cannot change depending on enviroments. Personality seems like soul therfore It cannot be acquired. We are born with our own personalities again and again. Am I so strict? because It means I don\'t give any chance to be able to change their personalities or I don\'t belive if someone promise to me change their personalities.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!  It was really a nice topic we have had today!  Ha ha ha  In this issue, we have opposite ideas. ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: Where do our personalities come from? Are they genetically or environmentally acquired? Explain.

I think personality comes from origin of human nature.

>>>    I think personality comes or originates from our human nature. 
 Because I know some people are from very bad and lowest condition of families. but they are so great people.

>>> I know some people who came from not so good family backgrounds but they still turned out as good people.    
 I think that natural personality cannot change depending on enviroments.

>>> I think that innate personalities cannot be changed by one\'s environment.      
 Personality seems like soul therfore It cannot be acquired.

>>> Our personality are like our souls so they cannot be externally acquired.     
 We are born with our own personalities again and again.

>>>    We are born with our own innate personalities.  
 Am I so strict? because It means I don\'t give any chance to be able to change their personalities or I don\'t belive if someone promise to me change their personalities.

>>> Am I being conventional because I don\'t give chances for people to change their personalities?   I just don\'t easily believe when people promise to change their personalities.    





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