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I like gossiping in my free time. I usually gossip with my friends, At school I gossip with my friends in restroom. But teacher said gossip is bad. That\'s why we have to gossip at reatroom^^.
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Hi [이름]!
I know how much you like talking.^^
You also write well.
I think you really have a way with words.
Keep it up!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like gossiping in my free time.
>> Correct
I usually gossip with my friends,
>> I usually gossip with my friends.
At school I gossip with my friends in restroom.
>> At school, I gossip with my friends in the restroom.
But teacher said gossip is bad.
>> However, my teacher said that gossiping is bad.
That\'s why we have to gossip at reatroom^^.
>> That\'s why we have to gossip in the restroom.
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