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학생이 쓴 원문
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Thank you Ms. [이름]!
I forgot to include the other one which is similar to the expression \'spill the beans\', let the cat out of the bag.
It\'s similar with the second expression I gave you. :) Nevertheless, enjoy the day at work.
As for me, I really can\'t wait when I go home at 12 because I\'ll be seeing my lovely daughter. :) I really admire your kind.
It\'s very rare to have a tough mom :)
warm regards,
Teacher Lucy
It\'s 5:50 pm on weekday, Wekend is whole day.
>>It\'s 5:50 pm on weekdays, weekend is whole day.
The thought that I can leave the office after 10 minutes makes me excited.
>>CORRECT!
>>It makes me excited when there\'s 10 more minutes left before leaving the office.
I\'m sure that every employee agree with it.
>>I\'m sure that every employee will agree with it.
Sometimes, problem happens with 5 minutes left.
>>Sometimes, problem happens within 5 minutes before going home.
It\'s not often.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s oftentimes.
Once I am in trouble, I\\\'m depressed.
>>CORRECT!
>>Once I\'m in trouble, I feel anxious.
My best part of the day is gone.
>>CORRECT!
>>The best time is gone.
I can\'t come back home unless I solve that problem.
>>CORRECT!
>>Solving the problem is priority before going home.
As a working mom, I have a lot of things to do after work.
>>CORRECT!
But now I\\\'m a little bit ok.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'m better now.
Because my sons grew up and they are busier than me.
>>Because as my sons growing up and they became busier than me.
I don\'t want to remember when my sons were younger.
>>CORRECT!
>>I can\'t bear to remember when my sons where younger.
At that time, as I faced problem in my office then I couldn\\\'t come back immediately, I was panicked.
>>At that time, as I faced problem in my office then I couldn\\\'t come back immediately, I panicked.
My young boys were wating for me with starving.
>>My young boys were wating for me while starving.
Anyway, I wish I can enjoy every moment in my life.
>>CORRECT!
>>Anyhow, I wish I can enjoy every bit of my life.
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