homework
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What are the pros and cons of having a credit card rather than bring cash?
The credit card leads to impulse purchasing without any thinking and plans. So it makes me spend a lot of money.
But it is easy to carry and use.
On the other hand, the cash is lazy to carry. And when I use the cash to buy many things, I should calculate whether short of money or not. It bothers me.
But it does not cause impulse purchasing.
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What are the pros and cons of having a credit card rather than bring cash?
The credit card leads to impulse purchasing without any thinking and plans. So it makes me spend a lot of money. But it is easy to carry and use.
The credit card leads to impulse purchasing without any thinking and plans. So it makes me spend a lot of money. But it is easy to carry and use.
>>>The credit card leads to impulsive purchasing without thinking and plans. That is the reason why it makes me spend a lot of money but it\'s so easy to carry and use.
On the other hand, the cash is lazy to carry. And when I use the cash to buy many things, I should calculate whether short of money or not.
On the other hand, the cash is lazy to carry. And when I use the cash to buy many things, I should calculate whether short of money or not.
>>>On the other hand, I\'m so lazy to carry cash. In addition, when I use my cash I need to calculate whether it will not short or it would be enough.
It bothers me. But it does not cause impulse purchasing.
>>>It bothers me but it does not cause impulsive purchasing.
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