homework
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ESSAY: Is gift giving common among all human cultures? Is the value of the gift or present important? Why? Explain the meaning of the saying \'It\'s the thought that counts.\'
\' It\'s the thought that counts\'.
I didn\'t know how I say in English. now I learn that. thank you Irene!
I think everone loves getting a present from anyone regardness it is expensive one or not.
Getting a presnet makes everyone happy.
When I was going to work last Monday, I met a woman who works for my apartment cleaning.
(I always say to hello her thiking about her hard works and I used to give some fruits her sometimes)
She gave a small package to me with a shy smile. I brought my office and opened .
It was a delicious rice cake she cook. I really touched when I ate the cakes.
I was very happoy all that day because of her present.
Present makes really people happy.
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Hello Ms. [이름]. Have a nice weekend!
~T. Irene ~
ESSAY: Is gift giving common among all human cultures? Is the value of the gift or present important? Why? Explain the meaning of the saying \'It\'s the thought that counts.\'
\' It\'s the thought that counts\'.
\' It\'s the thought that counts\'.
>>> Correct.
I didn\'t know how I say in English.
I didn\'t know how I say in English.
>>> I don’t know how to say it in English.
now I learn that. thank you Irene!
>>> It’s only now that I learned about it. Thank you Irene.
I think everone loves getting a present from anyone regardness it is expensive one or not.
I think everone loves getting a present from anyone regardness it is expensive one or not.
>>> I think everyone loves getting a present from anyone regardness if it is expensive or not.
Getting a present makes everyone happy.
Getting a present makes everyone happy.
I always say to hello her thiking about her hard works and I used to give some fruits her sometimes) >>> Correct.
When I was going to work last Monday, I met a woman who works for my apartment cleaning.
When I was going to work last Monday, I met a woman who works for my apartment cleaning.
>>> While I was on my way to work last Monday, I met a woman from the cleaning department.
(I always say to hello her thiking about her hard works and I used to give some fruits her sometimes)
(I always say to hello her thiking about her hard works and I used to give some fruits her sometimes)
>>> ( I always say to hello her thinking about her hard works so I used to give some fruits to her sometimes.)
She gave a small package to me with a shy smile.
She gave a small package to me with a shy smile.
>>> Correct.
I brought my office and opened .
>>> I brought it to my office and opened.
It was a delicious rice cake she cook.
It was a delicious rice cake she cook.
>>> It was a delicious rice cake she cooked.
I really touched when I ate the cakes.
>>> I really was deeply touched when I ate the cakes.
I was very happoy all that day because of her present.
I was very happoy all that day because of her present.
>>> I was really happy all day long because of her present.
Present makes really people happy.
Present makes really people happy.
>>> Presents really can make people come/get together.
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