homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]!
~ Teacher Lucy
I jaywalk once in a blue moon.
>>CORRECT!
>>I rarely jaywalk.
There is little car in ther early morining around my place.
>>There is a few car early morning around my place.
I sometimes ignore the traffic signal if no car is coming.
>>CORRECT!
>>If no car is coming I sometimes ignore the traffic signal.
I\'m shameful
>>My shameful behavior.
>>I\'m embarrassed.
I don\'t need to rush by taking a risk of ignoring the signal.
>>CORRECT!
But I don\'t know why I do like that.
>>CORRECT!
>>I don\'t know why I do that.
(Every pedestrian will definitely agree with me...)
>>Every passerby will definitely agree with me.
I know it will take only a few minutes to be changed the signal from red to green.
>>CORRECT!
>>I know it will take only a few minutes for the signal to shift from red to green.
The more serious problem is there are so many cars that ignore signals.
>>CORRECT!
>>There are so many cars that ignore signals which is the serious problem.
Even in the dark night.
>>CORRECT!
>>Even at gloomy night.
Sometimes, I panic when I face that situation.
>>CORRECT!
>>I sometimes panic when I face that situation.
When green light shows, I cross the road with a thoght of the car stopping.
>>CORRECT!
>>I cross the road with a thought of the car stopping when green light shows.
Despite it, some cars doesn\'t stop.
>>CORRECT!
We must not ignore the rules.
>>CORRECT!
We must follow the rules.
>>CORRECT!
From now on, I won\'t jaywalk.
>>CORRECT!
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