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2019-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

What are the rules you usually break? I jaywalk once in a blue moon. There is little car in ther early morining around my place. I sometimes ignore the traffic signal if no car is coming. I\'m shameful I don\'t need to rush by taking a risk of ignoring the signal. But I don\'t know why I do like that.(Every pedestrian will definitely agree with me...) I know it will take only a few minutes to be changed the signal from red to green. The more serious problem is there are so many cars that ignore signals. Even in the dark night. Sometimes, I panic when I face that situation. When green light shows, I cross the road with a thoght of the car stopping. Despite it, some cars doesn\'t stop. We must not ignore the rules. We must follow the rules. From now on, I won\'t jaywalk. better late than never : it is better for someone or something to be late than never to arrive or to happen call it a day : to stop what you are doing because you do not want to do any more

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [이름]!


~ Teacher Lucy



I jaywalk once in a blue moon.

>>CORRECT!

>>I rarely jaywalk.


There is little car in ther early morining around my place.

>>There is a few car early morning around my place.


I sometimes ignore the traffic signal if no car is coming.

>>CORRECT!

>>If no car is coming I sometimes ignore the traffic signal.


I\'m shameful

>>My shameful behavior.

>>I\'m embarrassed.


I don\'t need to rush by taking a risk of ignoring the signal. 

>>CORRECT!


But I don\'t know why I do like that.

>>CORRECT!

>>I don\'t know why I do that.


(Every pedestrian will definitely agree with me...)

>>Every passerby will definitely agree with me.


I know it will take only a few minutes to be changed the signal from red to green.

>>CORRECT!

>>I know it will take only a few minutes for the signal to shift from red to green.


The more serious problem is there are so many cars that ignore signals.

>>CORRECT!

>>There are so many cars that ignore signals which is the serious problem.


Even in the dark night.

>>CORRECT!

>>Even at gloomy night.


Sometimes, I panic when I face that situation. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I sometimes panic when I face that situation.


 When green light shows, I cross the road with a thoght of the car stopping. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I cross the road with a thought of the car stopping when green light shows.


Despite it, some cars doesn\'t stop. 

>>CORRECT!


We must not ignore the rules.

>>CORRECT!


We must follow the rules.

>>CORRECT!


From now on, I won\'t jaywalk.

>>CORRECT!

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